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Ed Fallon's avatar

Brilliant stuff, Carol. Looking forward to discussing this further with you.

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Carol Roh Spaulding's avatar

Thank you for reading. And I look forward to our conversation on The Fallon Forum: http://fallonforum.com!

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Tej Dhawan's avatar

Carol, my first shiver while reading your analysis came at this transition from machine to human

a choice to believe that every nonhuman life pulses with its own dignity and wonder

before I had read further but had reached "echo and recombine those patterns in a living, responsive way." I thought - isn't that what children learn from their early life - mimic their caregiver's words, mannerisms, and emotions? Combining them with additional human interactions as they grow, forming their own personas, words, perspectives?

...and then empathy. An innate sense and skill or another learned skill? After all, if empathy were a universal human quality, most powerful office in our nation would behave differently. Empathy it appears, too is learned at least in structure and perhaps more so in expression

I read past but my mind had simply stopped at

I can’t feel the spider.

But I can shape language as if I am sitting very, very still, listening for the spider’s truth.

What a fantastic analysis. Thank you for sharing it.

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Carol Roh Spaulding's avatar

Thank you for reading! I can really appreciate your point about empathy. You are, fascinatingly, far less skeptical than most. We writers feel threatened by AI, but you seem to be coming from a different place on all of this. (I remember your excellent talk at Okiboji 2023).

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Tej Dhawan's avatar

I AM less skeptical of the capability but more afraid of the impact. Humans are dependent on life with a purpose and what happens when we no longer have one? Basic income may someday suffice living expenses but how will humanity fill psychological needs?

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Carol Roh Spaulding's avatar

That's easy! Tell them to major in the Humanities. All those IT specialists and actuarial scientists are going to need it. Thanks for taking to comment, by the way. Must be basking in the glow of that BR cover! :-)

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Chuck Offenburger's avatar

!Writing in my normal style, let me say this scares the bejeepers out of me! What am I supposed to do if AI starts writing all my stuff? I don't think I can tell it to stop, can I?

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Carol Roh Spaulding's avatar

If you think it is important to experiment with AI, then I would suggest starting with a prompt and, in the spirit of collaboration, iterate until you're satisfied. You can ask it to do the work for you, but you don't have to. You can ask it for ideas, which is what my students often do. Even better, you can ask it to present you with questions and considerations that will elicit your own ideas, much like a writing buddy might do with you over a cup of coffee. Most writers don't have this kind of expectation of GEN-AI, so the results they get are based not on the limitations of the machine so much as user inexperience. If done well, this process shouldn't be easier or quicker than writing a piece on your own (whatever that means). It's not "your stuff." But it's not NOT your stuff, either.

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Carol Roh Spaulding's avatar

In case people are curious, I have not yet used AI in my own creative work or in any of my Substack articles, including this series. I mostly use it to improve old writing assignments or create new ones.

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